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Purpleflurp223
12-28-2003, 04:06 PM
It was just one of those days when the sun gleams itself on a town,city,the ocean,or even the simplest of little leaves,it shines the darkest parts of Earths and brings comfort and warmth to it`s surroundings.Hello my name is Sean Lakuna and I`am a 13 year old boy who is in search of a mystical place in the outskirts of town where the ocean is and the biggest and most gigantic of paranormal creatures awaits you to come to it`s lair so it can rip your skin apart.I woke up in my bed laying beside my friends,Kira,Morgan,Kyle(a girl),Alicia,and my brother and sister Brandon & Lia.We all went downstairs and ate pancakes and other stuff,suddenly I felt lips bite my earlobe sucking the warmth of it and peeling the dead skin,I thought I was just seeing things,but then there appeared a pink haired 19 year old woman who had dress on it that said"Housekeeper extrodinare!"she took the dress off anfd revealed an undershirt and a pair of green sweat pants."Hello handsome want some orange juice"she asked.I nodded and she sped into the kitchen then came back with a guitar and tried to slam it againest my head,but I grabbed her and slammed the guitar into her head knocking it clear off then destroyed the guitar and sent an energy bomb that blew her to the next dimension.

We all flew towards the ocean thing....and saw the pink haired girl get spit out of the Loch Ness Monster,she then rode him and tried to destroy us,but we threw enegy bombs that sent it into a couple of buildings and then landed on the ground,then I grabbed my two swords and sliced the guitar from with in it then sliced the girl into smitherings and when we left Kira said"That was one Messie Nessie"we all fell and said"KIRA!!!!!!!!!!!!Don`t be dumb!"

THE END

Purpleflurp223
12-28-2003, 04:12 PM
Explaining confusing parts:
When the girl appeared from the Loch Ness Monster(Haruko was the girl)she had another guitar and before she fell into Hell she teleported herself into Nessie`s stomach and the creature spit her out,and the other part of the buildings,those wren`t even owned by anyone,infact no one knows they even exist,and the kids have parents that are saiyans that`s why they can shoot energy beams and fly,and they also have a special ablitie tofind mystical lands unlike any other species that could never find the places.

thank you for reading this...trust me you should read this post,cause then you`ll be totally confused!

Munchkin
12-28-2003, 04:55 PM
Right when i thought i found a good FLCL fan fic..
Maybe it's just the fact that I don't like Dragon Ball or..it just plain sucked

Blacksmith- 鐵匠-
12-29-2003, 02:49 AM
FLCL fan fics never turn out good becuase the show's essence isn't just the plot it is the music and rawing and style of animation. you can't get that in a fanfic.

try harder you will get better!

Purpleflurp223
01-03-2004, 12:45 PM
Maybe if I tryed another approach like a more kinkier version...hmm?
Or maybe one that actually includes an FLCL character and they flirt with the main character!!!!!!!!!

Azuken
01-03-2004, 01:29 PM
or maybe u should watch the show and know u just cant make a fanfic to flcl