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Yeah, simple things in life are the best. Love is not simple. Its an awesome mental disorder.

I probably should've microwaved this cold pizza though.

​Great, thanks♥ I think I'll post the story in parts of chapters, in both my blog and in the Writer's Block section. But I'll have to finish enough to post first♥

I like the idea of this, I'll be keen on reading the full story and reading the updates.

Haha, nice one girl, nice one.

Understand that. I watched the sun set tonight. The storm earlier made the sky emit some pretty colors today. Help someone in need out too. COMMENCE THE WARM FUZZLE FEELINGS AT ONCE!

Sorry for double post, smartphone isnt too smart...like shortbus status smart but...

​Great♥ ^•^

I think that's fine then and I also prefer the younger age.

@sinless: Now that I've thought about it, I don't think I need to tell a reason for Kirito to go find his father. If your father disappeared, wouldn't you go look for him, if you weren't mad at him for leaving?

@Furie: I've decided I really like the younger ages (probably in part, because they're closer to my currant age. I had them older for a reason thast is no longer relevant).
And I like that Mr. Yoshihiro could see his son graduate college, but if he's in college, how does he have the time to go out and look for his father?

As to the marrage/and or/child, I wasn't planning on taking the story that far. And he would be marrying Julia (which is the romantic aspect I mentioned. Kirito will profess his long-hidden love for her, and such), but that would take place after the story ends.

@Kaoru, I think either age is fine. I like younger because then maybe Kirito's dad can return home in time to see him graduate college (if he went to college)

If he's older, maybe dad can make it home in time to watch Kirito get married (if you decide he's getting married) or Kirito&wife having their first child (if you decide he should have a child)

I'm not sure if adding Kirito's big life events will throw off your story. T'was only ideas.

Hmm, maybe make it so Kirito really stayed close to his father and played with him a majority of the time. Julia was a friend, but liked Kirito even though he often ignored her to play with his father. When his father disappears she becomes the one who supports him through it and can lead to mutual love.

@sinless: If you've got any ideas how to portray this, please lay them on me.

@Furie: I like the names, and (although I don't think it will ever be published) I don't think using those names would be a problem, because I'm not using the last names and my characters are not based on their characters or their personalities.

@Kuze: Good idea (that's kind of what I was thinking). I just need to figure out some hardships for them to suffer through.

And I just want to note that Julia was over at Kirito's house the day his father didn't come home from work, so they really bonded over that that day, and they've been best friends since that day (althoughh they had been friends since Jules was born--she's 2 years younger, 26 to his 28--because they have lived nextdoor to each other their entire lives and their parents are friends).

And now that I think about it, I might make them younger, have less time in between the day Mr. Yoshihiro leaves and when Kirito desides to try and find him. Maybe make Kirito and Jules be 22 and 20 or something. Got any comments on any of these comments anyone?

Nice story idea, in my opinion. The characters could do with more simpler names. The aspect of romance (between Kirito and Julia I assume) could be given emphasis during their travels when the pair face hardships and overcome those hardships together.

I like the idea, but not the names (unless you specifically say the father was a fan of the anime SAO or something. Even then, if you choose to publish this, you might have to contact the company for the rights to the names, I'm not really sure)

Other than those two names, I like the idea. If you write it, let me know. I'd very much like to read it.

I believe at least some development to show how close the child and father are would help make it more believable that he would drop everything and chase after his father(Who may be dead).

​Yes. And thank you for not being mad at me like everybody on this site who blogs, because they all kind of hate me right now...Again, sorry everyone(except Tony Tony)!

Should a writer stop reading; a director stop watching movies? etc.

No artist should ever stop looking at what their peers are creating.

F*ck you! I can blog whatever the f*ck I want! What is your damn problem!

can u **** off with all these blogs?

Yeah, it really doesn't do much for you. Boil some veggies and an egg or two in there. Then you can probably eat it a little more often.

By then you would probably be sick of it finally. Try buying some off brand ramen at local asian food stores! They have some more adventurous flavors